Thursday, November 20, 2008

map of the problematique

what have you done to me?
i was so sure of my existence
so sure of what i wanted
then you had to go and say those words
changing everything
opening a door that i never even knew was there
oh don't get me wrong
i've been wanting to hear you say it
but now i am stuck
with a constant smile on my face
feeling guilty that it is there
i miss you, too

2 comments:

angela said...

i really liked this one. it is such a strange feeling when someone can say something that just changes everything. and all i think when it happens is wow. luff you!

Elysie said...

wow. i really liked that.

i'm not going to describe what it made me think of because the campfire in the canyon wasn't a very good description of your other poem. but this one was really good.